This is my song:
Suicide
When I look at the world I wonder,
How can we live with all this pain we carry on out backs.
How do we strive to live through it all?
How do I walk without falling down?
How do I smile without having a frown?
How do I live this live without crying my eyes out?
But why do we live such a selfish life where we take more than we need,
Why do we spend so much time changing ourselfs, to some one we can’t be!
Why do we fall in love twice at the same time?
It makes me want to do suicide!
I just wanna take my life!
And do suicide!
But I know its’ wrong.
And I know it’s wrong.
Cause you can’t just run and hide from the truth!
I just wanna die,
I just wanna die.
This is not something you should do,
But what is the point of life?
What makes us strife,
to live untill we die.
And yelling voices just adds more to the shame,
Oh I just want to take away this pain!
It makes me want to do suicide!
I just wanna take my life!
And do suicide!
But I know its’ wrong.
And I know it’s wrong.
Cause you can’t just run and hide from the truth!
I just wanna die,
I just wanna die.
This is not something you should do,
But what is the point of life?
What makes us strife,
to live untill we die.
My Last question is…
Why didn’t you stop me…
I thought you wanted me to live.
This is my other song(total opposite):
Angels Wings
One day I decided,
No more hidin’ form the world.
The next day I decided,
That I will live forever!!
Then I thought to my self,
If I ‘d do what I dreamed,
I would be so happy,
So I decided that
I’m gonna sprout my wings and fly.
I gonna, fly higher than the clouds.
I’m gonna sing like an angle and live to the end.
Just like you said.
I’m gonna wave to all on the ground!!!
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I really don't know what life is all about. I am not a regular 14 year old. as you can see. I really need some one to talk to!
Comments
Young one, broken heart,
Young one, broken heart, battered soul
Your poem touched me to the heart
So much pain, so much anguish
Look within, look to your soul
What do you see that is good.
I know there is good, keep looking
Start with the good, build on it
Use it to your advantage.
Seek more good within
Use it and build on it.
You will free yourself from the pain
You will break away.
I know you can, because you want to
Your call was for help
You received
Keep looking within
The meaning of life is
The meaning of life is simply - love. Love is more than just a feeling, more than a sweet caress, more than putting a scarf around your childs neck to keep out the cold. Love is your very life. Love is an energy and force that powers the universe. Make the choice to walk in that energy stream.
If you die, the world will
If you die, the world will still go on, so why die?
If you live, the world will still go on, and maybe you can do something to make it a better place, so don't die.
I want you to live, but what good is stopping you if you really want to die?
The real fight is within you.
Find something that you will die for, and live for it!!
GOOOOO!!!!
I totally love your song,
I totally love your song, and you can get life on ebay :]
get a life or end yours!
get a life or end yours!
Literature is definitely not
Literature is definitely not the way that will lead a man to a proper conclusion. Nice words and emotional charge are not helping. Truth can be beautiful even without making a poem of it. Poets don't try to give reality back in their poems. Read 'The Feynman Lectures on Physics' from Richard P. Feynman - he was entertaining and he could show the real side of reality (not the fake side or half-truths what you can see in TV and literature). I don't say literature is wrong or useless. I just say if you need answers then try to find them. For this, try to ask the proper question, try to find the primary, basic question. Like for me it is "is there a purpose of existence?".
First you can start with simple, every-day questions, and you can go forth to more complexes. Like why do we see perspectivity? or what is heat? or how do physical processes become electromagnetic impulses in my brain? what are mind-images? what is a thought? does it have a substance? what is the difference between reality and what I see?
Thousands of questions are there to be asked, and you can asnwer most of them. Throwing your life away just because you don't understand things is crazy. There is the bright, rational, logical way straight ahead, you just have to walk on it. And it will eventually get you to a conclusion what can answer you even such ultimate questions like "is there a purpose of existence?".
You have to admit that even if you belive something to be true, it might turn out to be wrong as you go alogn. With new knowledge, new opportunities arise, you'll probably find that you were wrong earlier. If you want a good life then you have to accept this: your life is not good right now because you are wrong in something, so you have to drop away some of your thoughts and find the truth. If you can't leave your subjective truths for the ultimate truths then you'll never find what you strive for.
Death will be the end of all your experiences in this life for sure. But dying just because not knowing something is a stupid thing. Finding the answer to the meaning of life, or the goal of existence, or whatever, can really be something to live for. The search for the meaning of life can give a meaning to life.
What do you think would happen if you'd die now? Maybe there is reincarnation and you'll have to start all over again (and maybe there is karma and you'll have a much worse life than now). So technically, you wouldn't even delay the problem - you'd push yourself even into a bigger trouble.
Decisions are not enough for a meaningful life. Acting according to the decisions is always necessary. This is what we call true faith. Now you have faith. You just have to get your faith closer to the ultimate reality. And every time you succeed in this, you'll get a bit better life.